Such a vivid description. I have had that nightmare where I become cognisant that I’m trapped in it and can’t break through the ice. The ceiling. No breath. And then…, the puppet is loose. Brilliant, Brandi.
There's such power in your words Brandi. The brevity and the somatic nature of them let me feel them before my mind had a chance to catch up. There's no unnecessary description, just force behind lines like "It stops. It breaks. / Every nerve falls slack."
This piece feels like a journey to the centre of the earth, but in a fever-driven hallucination or dream, and the severence at the end lands so well.
Such a vivid description. I have had that nightmare where I become cognisant that I’m trapped in it and can’t break through the ice. The ceiling. No breath. And then…, the puppet is loose. Brilliant, Brandi.
It is paralyzing - isn’t it? ✨
It is.
Wow. Such beautiful piece
Glad I found you
Thank you ✨
There's such power in your words Brandi. The brevity and the somatic nature of them let me feel them before my mind had a chance to catch up. There's no unnecessary description, just force behind lines like "It stops. It breaks. / Every nerve falls slack."
This piece feels like a journey to the centre of the earth, but in a fever-driven hallucination or dream, and the severence at the end lands so well.
Beautiful writing.
Thank you for reading so deeply. I am glad that the quick, descent came through. I appreciate you taking the time to write such a wonderful comment ✨
I loved reading the vivid details and also struck by the musicality in your verses.
Thank you ✨
I don't know how to explain it, but this felt familiar ❤️
No explanation needed - I totally understand ✨
Brilliant piece my love
Thank you Aaliya ✨
Great imagery. I could feel the panic and release. <3
Thank you ✨
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Wicked
Wow…so very powerful, Brandi. I felt this one. That final line…a puppet cut loose…chills. 🙏💕🫶
Thank you ✨